1. Posted: August 24, 2022In:

    A surgeon with a god complex loves the thrill that comes with holding a person’s life in his hands, getting to choose who lived and who died was just a harmless game for him until one night he gets caught in the act.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi A.G.F, I suggest you click on the Formula icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. For now, this is how I see it though; Playing God and enjoying the power of having patients' lives in his hands, a surgeon gets carried away. But I'm sure there's more to your story than your lRead more

    Hi A.G.F,

    I suggest you click on the Formula icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.
    For now, this is how I see it though;

    Playing God and enjoying the power of having patients’ lives in his hands, a surgeon gets carried away.

    But I’m sure there’s more to your story than your logline reveals.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: July 21, 2022In:

    When a bioengineer recognizes technology that’s being used to overthrow governments, he must defeat powerful politicians to save his life, his family, and democracies worldwide.

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher

    Alternative: When a retired bio-engineer programmer realizes exactly how technology Is being used on senior elected officials to overthrow the U.S. government, he must risk his, and his family’s, life to preserve democracy. And, possibly, the world.

    Alternative:
    When a retired bio-engineer programmer realizes exactly how technology Is being used on senior elected officials to overthrow the U.S. government, he must risk his, and his family’s, life to preserve democracy. And, possibly, the world.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2022In:

    Three privileged millennial women who escaped Corporate Manhattan for a life in the country set out to infiltrate a local dog fighting ring after accidentally killing one of its high ranking members before they fall prey to a hunt for retribution.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Anniepress, After accidentally killing one of their high-ranking members, three privileged young women set out to infiltrate a local dog fighting ring to avoid retaliation. I hope this helps.

    Hi Anniepress,

    After accidentally killing one of their high-ranking members, three privileged young women set out to infiltrate a local dog fighting ring to avoid retaliation.

    I hope this helps.

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