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Seeing his wife’s ghost each morning for breakfast a man becomes vigilante after the police decide to stop investigating her murder.
This logline needs to be shuffled around a little bit, the way it reads, it sounds like seeing his wife's ghost is the inciting incident when really it is the police stopping the investigation. So all the elements are here, but just in a slightly jumbled order. ----- After the police end the investiRead more
This logline needs to be shuffled around a little bit, the way it reads, it sounds like seeing his wife’s ghost is the inciting incident when really it is the police stopping the investigation.
So all the elements are here, but just in a slightly jumbled order.
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After the police end the investigation into his wife’s murder, a man haunted by her ghost becomes a vigilante, determined to find her killer.”
A bizarre explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to confront his beliefs about the universe in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.
While I could see this film piquing my interest, two things stand out to me in the logline: the use of the word "bizarre," and "confront his beliefs about the universe." What is bizarre about the explosion? Would that take too long to explain or could word choice be more succinct? And what about hisRead more
While I could see this film piquing my interest, two things stand out to me in the logline: the use of the word “bizarre,” and “confront his beliefs about the universe.” What is bizarre about the explosion? Would that take too long to explain or could word choice be more succinct? And what about his beliefs needs confronting? Is he baffled? Is it his understanding of reality?
A mysterious explosion forces a slick counterterrorism agent to come face to face with a new reality in order to stop a cult from unleashing ancient gods on the modern world.
Just a tweak, maybe?
See lessA brilliant and flawed woman investigates WWII documents and is suddenly thrown into a world of professional assassins and one of the biggest banking cover-ups in recent history.
I think it helps if we know why she was investigating these documents. Is she a granddaughter of a holocaust victim looking to reclaim lost family heirlooms? Is she a history professor doing a research project? Maybe she’s a nazi hunter and the movie is set in the 70s?
I think it helps if we know why she was investigating these documents. Is she a granddaughter of a holocaust victim looking to reclaim lost family heirlooms? Is she a history professor doing a research project? Maybe she’s a nazi hunter and the movie is set in the 70s?
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