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After his feminist wife comes in possession of a gun that belongs to the mafia , a timid man has to stop and fight the mafia that they are now running from, and save his failing marriage in the process.
The inciting incident is them witnessing a mafia murder. Why is her wanting to go to the police a problem for the husband? This is the best thing they can do, unless, of course, he is a member of a rival mafia.
The inciting incident is them witnessing a mafia murder. Why is her wanting to go to the police a problem for the husband? This is the best thing they can do, unless, of course, he is a member of a rival mafia.
See lessAn introverted student is infatuated with her flamboyant flatmate, but when fatal ?accidents? befall her flatmate?s lovers, she must clean up not only to keep her flatmate out of trouble, but ultimately to save herself.
Agreed with Foxtrot25 and Richiev. What is it the student wants most of all? Is it to shtup her flatmate, or to save her life? Which of these is her primary goal that drives her throughout the story? Secondly, what specific event starts her off on her journey? In other words, which one of the "...faRead more
Agreed with Foxtrot25 and Richiev.
What is it the student wants most of all? Is it to shtup her flatmate, or to save her life? Which of these is her primary goal that drives her throughout the story?
Secondly, what specific event starts her off on her journey? In other words, which one of the “…fatal accidents…” triggers her to take action and why? This is the inciting incident and needs to be described first.
See lessAfter uncovering a false flag terror plot, a na?ve but ambitious reporter risks her life and the lives of her colleagues to unmask the conspirators before they topple the US government for the story of a lifetime.
Agreed with DPG and Eathan. There is very little about this that sounds unique enough, it needs a unique ability or set of circumstances. What if the reporter was somehow related to the terrorist or presidential family? This could give them a unique vantage point no one else has. However, even withRead more
Agreed with DPG and Eathan.
There is very little about this that sounds unique enough, it needs a unique ability or set of circumstances. What if the reporter was somehow related to the terrorist or presidential family? This could give them a unique vantage point no one else has. However, even with that, you would still need to explain how exactly the terrorists can conceivably achieve their overly ambitious goal. Perhaps lower their aim to something more achievable like blowing up Yankee Stadium or setting off a bomb in the Super Bowl anything that would add credibility to their actions.
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