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When a hyper-sexualised girl band becomes trapped by a psychopathic religious woman, a pop singer must kill her band and manipulate her captor to escape.
Yes about the crazy woman - properly motivating her will help to motivate the protagonist. Darth Vader's motivation increased Luke's obstacle, and in turn made his journey more interesting. Same with Max Cady in cape fear and Gus in Breaking Bad. But the quality of motivation counts as well. PerhapsRead more
Yes about the crazy woman – properly motivating her will help to motivate the protagonist. Darth Vader’s motivation increased Luke’s obstacle, and in turn made his journey more interesting. Same with Max Cady in cape fear and Gus in Breaking Bad.
But the quality of motivation counts as well. Perhaps the crazy woman’s daughter, a die hard fan, recently became a teenage stat by falling pregnant during a concert and the mother is out for revenge.
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Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments. It's hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
Agreed with, DPG and Gaerhart in the above comments.
See lessIt’s hard to understand the concept from the logline, and the premise seems generic. I suggest you use personal stakes, character flaws and unique obstacles to make the premise more interesting.
When a hunting trip in the Highlands of Iceland goes horribly wrong a disabled teenager must rely on her inner strength and local know-how to survive the merciless elements and save her mortaly wounded hunting guide father from the clutches of his deranged foreign client.
As above said this needs to be more specific. "Horribly wrong" could mean any number of things, try and flesh this out then fine tune it to 25-35 words as this is a long one.
As above said this needs to be more specific. “Horribly wrong” could mean any number of things, try and flesh this out then fine tune it to 25-35 words as this is a long one.
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