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  1. Posted: November 15, 2018In: Thriller

    After waking up in cells with only a 12-hour countdown and a row of switches on the wall, two individuals must figure out how to work together in isolation in order to escape.

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    Added an answer on November 17, 2018 at 11:34 am

    Saw with switches... What is it about the cell they wake up in that makes it scarey? What's the danger they face? Also, what's unique about these particular characters?

    Saw with switches…

    What is it about the cell they wake up in that makes it scarey? What’s the danger they face?

    Also, what’s unique about these particular characters?

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2018In: Thriller

    When six brutal water-related murders are uncovered on the same day, an aquaphobic detective must uncover the killer?s identity as the clues become increasingly more personal.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2018 at 6:59 am

    While I think mrliteral's version is an improvement, it still leaves me mystified as to? what it means that "the clues become increasingly more personal."? More personal in what sense?? That the clues implicate the detective as the prime suspect? Or that the clues implicate him as the next victim?AnRead more

    While I think mrliteral’s version is an improvement, it still leaves me mystified as to? what it means that “the clues become increasingly more personal.”? More personal in what sense?? That the clues implicate the detective as the prime suspect? Or that the clues implicate him as the next victim?

    And what is the story hook?

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  3. Posted: October 28, 2018In: Thriller

    When a young man is tormented by the spirit of his dead father telling him his mother will die because of him, he tries to find out more about his death.

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    Added an answer on November 1, 2018 at 1:23 pm

    Agreed with DPG and Mike. I'll add that "...young man..." is perfectly generic and lacks the detail a protagonist's description needs. It would be better to describe him through his flaw and profession instead.

    Agreed with DPG and Mike.

    I’ll add that “…young man…” is perfectly generic and lacks the detail a protagonist’s description needs. It would be better to describe him through his flaw and profession instead.

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