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When exiled from his town, a duplicitous man must confront his identity.
Sounds cool but you could add some stakes and a clearer goal to make it easier to visualize :)
Sounds cool but you could add some stakes and a clearer goal to make it easier to visualize 🙂
See lessWhen dangerous robbers invade her remote country manor, a stubborn elderly widow must use her intimate knowledge of the building and her collection of ancient weaponry to fend them off.
Sounds like a cool movie Paul. What about the logline below? When robbers break into the house of a recently widowed old woman, she must use her intimate knowledge of the house and her collection of ancient weaponry to take her grief out on the robbers. 35 words,
Sounds like a cool movie Paul. What about the logline below?
When robbers break into the house of a recently widowed old woman, she must use her intimate knowledge of the house and her collection of ancient weaponry to take her grief out on the robbers.
35 words,
See lessEdit2 – When a man inherits his father?s fortune he is shot while he sleeps, he wakes to his final day on earth rewinding around him and must figure out who shot him before he bleeds to death.
You must explain the connection between the main character being shot and him havin inherited his father?s fortune. Does the shoter wants to steal the money? If so, write it. "When a man, who has recently inherited his father?s fortune, gets killed in his sleep and wakes up again to face his final dRead more
You must explain the connection between the main character being shot and him havin inherited his father?s fortune. Does the shoter wants to steal the money? If so, write it.
See less“When a man, who has recently inherited his father?s fortune, gets killed in his sleep and wakes up again to face his final day on earth, he must figure out who shot him before night falls.” If you use “before he bleeds to death” it sounds like he wakes in the morning and is already bleeding; and therefor wouldn?t live for very long anyways.