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  1. Posted: June 13, 2018In: Thriller

    When a family skiing trip ends in the murder of her parents, a sheltered teenager must lead her friends through a blizzard to escape a gang of vengeful hunters.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:54 am

    So her parents were murdered by hunters who were pissed at them about something and who now want to hurt her and her friends as well?

    So her parents were murdered by hunters who were pissed at them about something and who now want to hurt her and her friends as well?

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  2. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Thriller

    Shannon meets Beau

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    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:04 am

    My initial thought was "that's hilarious". Because I can't take it seriously if the ghost first has a pleasant evening of sex and THEN starts getting vengeful. Your set up is whacky in the kind of way that comedies can get away with, but not thrillers.

    My initial thought was “that’s hilarious”. Because I can’t take it seriously if the ghost first has a pleasant evening of sex and THEN starts getting vengeful. Your set up is whacky in the kind of way that comedies can get away with, but not thrillers.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2018In: Thriller

    The Project

    TullyArcher Samurai
    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 2:02 am

    No protagonist, and also, they do all that FOR A CLASS PROJECT? Are they crapping money? And what kind of trap? What is at stake? What do they need to do? You're missing MOST of the components of a logline.

    No protagonist, and also, they do all that FOR A CLASS PROJECT? Are they crapping money? And what kind of trap? What is at stake? What do they need to do? You’re missing MOST of the components of a logline.

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