War – Page 2 – Logline It!

Posted: August 23, 2022In: War

Set during the Blitz, a pacifist Air Raid Warden fights to keep his community safe against the merciless Luftwaffe.

Added an answer on August 23, 2022 at 3:39 pm

Hi WARRIN88 A pilot / air raid warden fights against the Luftwaffe / German air force during an air strike aimed to .......... OR A pilot / air raid warden guards his people by thwarting the merciless Luftwaffe / Germany's air force attempt to ............... by an airstrike. Use this as a templateRead more

Hi WARRIN88

A pilot / air raid warden fights against the Luftwaffe / German air force during an air strike aimed to ……….
OR
A pilot / air raid warden guards his people by thwarting the merciless Luftwaffe / Germany’s air force attempt to …………… by an airstrike.

Use this as a template if you think I got your story right and re-write. I suggest using widely understood terms in your logline.

I hope this helps.

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Posted: July 12, 2022In: War

A timid, introverted teenage girl and a forthcoming, extroverted teenage boy reluctantly team up in a race against time to defeat an over-zealous, power-hungry CEO. 4 4 Comments Share Save

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Added an answer on July 15, 2022 at 4:12 pm

Hi Harris, Why reluctantly? Why did you use this term? Does that mean they have a bitter history? If yes, then I think you should include it in your logline, too, if you really think you have to. I hope this helps.

Hi Harris,

Why reluctantly? Why did you use this term? Does that mean they have a bitter history? If yes, then I think you should include it in your logline, too, if you really think you have to.

I hope this helps.

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