Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Professional: The Faunus Rights Revolution is a thematically charged action and war drama, centered around a trio of young Faunus fighting to save their people from persecution, deportation, and death at the hands of Humanity. Commercial: In the world of Remnant, the Faunus face oppression and deportation at the hands of humans. Three young heroes join the resistance to defend their people.
Hi David, Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information about logline conventions.
Hi David,
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information about logline conventions.
See lessa lost military runner must team up with a soldier of the warring nation, after splitting with his navigator, in the forest they now intend to cross resourceless, before the lack of intelligence-he must relay-causes more casualties..
Look at the need. ?Lost? & ?separated? have the same impact, you don?t need both. A lost soldier must make is way back with vital intelligence when he encounters an enemy soldier who seems willing to help, until they find weapons. I can?t see the emotion in this. Stuck in no mans land a soldierRead more
Look at the need. ?Lost? & ?separated? have the same impact, you don?t need both.
A lost soldier must make is way back with vital intelligence when he encounters an enemy soldier who seems willing to help, until they find weapons.
I can?t see the emotion in this.
Stuck in no mans land a soldier finds a lost enemy soldier who is willing to help him get home, until they both find guns causing brotherhood to turn to hatred.
See lessA British Major and aristocrat must team up with a vulgar guerilla leader in order to blow up a bridge in Nazi occupied Greece. Based on a true story.
Maybe something like: The true story of an aristocratic British major and a vulgar guerrilla leader who team up to choke off supplies to Rommel's army in North Africa by destroying strategic railroad bridges in Nazi occupied Greece. (35 words) I tweaked it a little because given how mountainous theRead more
Maybe something like:
The true story of an aristocratic British major and a vulgar guerrilla leader who team up to choke off supplies to Rommel’s army in North Africa by destroying strategic railroad bridges in Nazi occupied Greece.
(35 words)
I tweaked it a little because given how mountainous the landscape of Greece is, I imagine that there were many bridges that would have been targets for sabotage.? If, however, they teamed up only to target the most important one, the one that would be hardest for the Nazis to rebuild, then amend accordingly.
fwiw
See less