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After the head of a giant corporation discovers a malicious conspiracy, he works by night to bring down the very company he leads by day
I agree that it happens often, meensster. It seems like the catchy short logline has to miss some ingredients (how much can you put in 20 words?) and then the 30 word logline gives away too much. Giant corporation and malicious conspiracy has more intrigue than multinational bank and counterfeitingRead more
I agree that it happens often, meensster. It seems like the catchy short logline has to miss some ingredients (how much can you put in 20 words?) and then the 30 word logline gives away too much. Giant corporation and malicious conspiracy has more intrigue than multinational bank and counterfeiting but the latter is more specific.
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I really like this idea. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but that's the fun part! I agree that you need to reveal more about their profession. By doing so it may even get people laughing, even at this initial phase of the pitch.
I really like this idea. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but that’s the fun part! I agree that you need to reveal more about their profession. By doing so it may even get people laughing, even at this initial phase of the pitch.
See lessThe only way the few remaining humans can survive the Vampire Apocalypse is by continually staying under the sunlight – but fuel, resources and transportation are running low.
I take it that the vampiric apocalypse hasn't happened yet. Staying under the sunlight or staying in the sunlight? What does low fuel, resources and transportation have to do with it? You could try and give it that personal touch.
I take it that the vampiric apocalypse hasn’t happened yet. Staying under the sunlight or staying in the sunlight? What does low fuel, resources and transportation have to do with it? You could try and give it that personal touch.
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