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After his daughter is killed by a drunk driver who goes free on a technicality, a circuit court justice takes sentencing into his own hands
"freed on a technicality..." Great logline; concept though is a bit cliche. A different twist having the judge be the avenger, but "circuit court"? Too menial for my tastes. Supreme Court? Now, we're talking! Make the judge a real libby-lib type who lets the heinous among us walk free on technicalitRead more
“freed on a technicality…” Great logline; concept though is a bit cliche.
A different twist having the judge be the avenger, but “circuit court”? Too menial for my tastes. Supreme Court? Now, we’re talking! Make the judge a real libby-lib type who lets the heinous among us walk free on technicalities, and you have some strong irony.
Still, when it is all said and done, still sounds like I’ve seen it.
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I wouldn't touch a thing! Perfect the way it is.
I wouldn’t touch a thing! Perfect the way it is.
See lessA na?ve new prison psychiatrist takes it upon herself to fight for the rights of an aging hit-man kept in solitary confinement, but when her husband is kidnapped, he?s the only one she can turn to for help.
Thanks Doc. I think you summed it all up perfectly. Yes, it has Silence of the Lambs written all over it. In fact, I'm trying to avoid making it too similar. The points you make have made me rethink the structure of the movie. Shows you how important these loglines are. The kidnapping would be arounRead more
Thanks Doc.
I think you summed it all up perfectly. Yes, it has Silence of the Lambs written all over it. In fact, I’m trying to avoid making it too similar. The points you make have made me rethink the structure of the movie. Shows you how important these loglines are. The kidnapping would be around the middle. When things become serious. Up until then it’s merely threats and small gestures. So I think I will remove it from the logline.
The idea is, there is a Mob Boss in the prison who wants the Psychiatrist to have him transferred to a low security mental facility. But I’m not sure how to include him and the hit man. Do I need both? What would Silence of the Lambs logline be? Would it include Hannibal and Buffalo Bill?
I might have to remove the part about fighting for the hit mans rights.
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