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Two recently graduated teens must hitchhike across the country in order to make the most out of their summer.
Why "must" they do this? I know some people recommend stating characters must accomplish something, because it indicates there are stakes, but that only works when they actually have something to lose. John McClane must stop the terrorists; no one MUST go hitchhiking. Just dropping that one single wRead more
Why “must” they do this? I know some people recommend stating characters must accomplish something, because it indicates there are stakes, but that only works when they actually have something to lose. John McClane must stop the terrorists; no one MUST go hitchhiking. Just dropping that one single word makes it an acceptable logline, though doesn’t tell us much about the story or their characters.
Getting the most out of a summer is a bit vague; why is this important? What’s at stake? Are they a young couple going to different colleges in the fall and this is how they want to spend time together before they separate? Why is it compelling that they hitchhike vs doing anything else all summer? Is this set in the current year when hitchhiking is considered dangerous and they insist despite parental objection? Or is it several decades ago, when the practice was considered more harmless and they just want to experience the adventure?
Give us some indication of the tone of the story, because when it isn’t plot-driven (which coming-of-age-stories rarely are), we need something to make it sound interesting.
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A logline needs four things: protagonist, antagonist, conflict, stakes. You've specified none of them. Who are they? Why must they do what they're doing? What are they doing? What actually happens? And what does AP mean? Also: never start a logline with "When..." Start with the protagonist, define tRead more
A logline needs four things: protagonist, antagonist, conflict, stakes. You’ve specified none of them. Who are they? Why must they do what they’re doing? What are they doing? What actually happens? And what does AP mean? Also: never start a logline with “When…” Start with the protagonist, define the other three elements. Use 25-30 words and no punctuation. Leave nothing unclear.
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Like suggested before, please?Follow the link Our Formula on the top of the page that will guide you on the expected format of a logline. What you describe is not a logline, but a situation or a resume of the introduction.
Like suggested before, please?Follow the link Our Formula on the top of the page that will guide you on the expected format of a logline.
See lessWhat you describe is not a logline, but a situation or a resume of the introduction.