Genre: Television

Loglines for TV shows or single episodes.

  1. Posted: October 10, 2021In:

    When a self-centered young talented musician lusting for the lifestyle of a rockstar, scores him and his band of brothers a chance to be signed and mentored by one of the music industry’s big time acts, he must wrestle with the rewards and pitfalls of stardom in the music industry as an artist and become a better man to those around him.

    tschrack Penpusher

    What you have here is a synopsis. Let's get it short and snappy. For example, it takes 5 words to describe our protagonist. Can you get that down to 2-3? Maybe "A selfish drummer" or "young drummer" and mention his ego later. A young rocker destined for stardom battles his ego when a legend won't siRead more

    What you have here is a synopsis. Let’s get it short and snappy. For example, it takes 5 words to describe our protagonist. Can you get that down to 2-3? Maybe “A selfish drummer” or “young drummer” and mention his ego later.

    A young rocker destined for stardom battles his ego when a legend won’t sign him without a full band.

    My example is short and not unique/compelling yet but maybe build from it?

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  2. Posted: October 10, 2021In:

    A young extraordinary adventurer lead his friends on misadventures and learn life lessons along the way.

    tschrack Penpusher

    I think we need more here. I'm not compelled just yet. What is the misadventure, what are the stakes, and what can go wrong? Also, is there a word you could find that could combine young & adventurer? Or you could implant "young" in another way? For example, "An amateur (or aspiring) adventurerRead more

    I think we need more here. I’m not compelled just yet. What is the misadventure, what are the stakes, and what can go wrong? Also, is there a word you could find that could combine young & adventurer? Or you could implant “young” in another way? For example, “An amateur (or aspiring) adventurer leads a group of teens…” Sounds kind of like a Goonies-style coming-of-age adventure but right now I’m taking liberties in surmising that.

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  3. Posted: June 7, 2021In:

    After a classmate dies while failing to control their emerging superpowers, a socially outcast high school student searches for answers and fights to keep her isolated Colorado town safe.

    Odie Samurai

    Consider the following: What is the superpower origin story? Who is this classmate to your outcast and what is their “answer” goal? Good location, who is the baddie he needs to stop? Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

    Consider the following:
    What is the superpower origin story?
    Who is this classmate to your outcast and what is their “answer” goal?
    Good location, who is the baddie he needs to stop?

    Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

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