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When a young man is cryogenically frozen for a thousand years, he must come to terms with his new life in a comical future full of robots, aliens, and space travel.
I mean, that's the engine isn't it, and clarifies the tone as well. I wonder though whether there's a more concrete goal that the character pursues, that will drive their actions throughout the series? 'Come to terms with' is kind of amorphous and hard to visualize what that's actually going to entaRead more
I mean, that’s the engine isn’t it, and clarifies the tone as well.
I wonder though whether there’s a more concrete goal that the character pursues, that will drive their actions throughout the series?
See less‘Come to terms with’ is kind of amorphous and hard to visualize what that’s actually going to entail.
When their demon-hunting father goes missing, two brothers band together to find him and destroy the demon that killed their mother.
It feels a little like the characters have split goals: find their father and/or destroy the demon that killed their mother. It's clear how he event (father goes missing) connects to one action (find father). But it's not clear how destroying the demon that killed their mother is related to the evenRead more
It feels a little like the characters have split goals: find their father and/or destroy the demon that killed their mother.
It’s clear how he event (father goes missing) connects to one action (find father).
But it’s not clear how destroying the demon that killed their mother is related to the event.
See lessWhen their husbands leave them to marry each other, two life-long frenemies must overcome their yuppie vs hippie animosity, form an actual deep friendship, and help each other make something rare and special of the third act of their lives.
Is it possible to refocus the action section of the logline to tangible goals that the characters actively seek, rather than the internal journeys the characters will go on throughout the series? What does "make something rare and special of the third act of their lives" look like?
Is it possible to refocus the action section of the logline to tangible goals that the characters actively seek, rather than the internal journeys the characters will go on throughout the series?
What does “make something rare and special of the third act of their lives” look like?
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