Genre: TVPOD

This is the genre/category to be used for developers and participants to the TVPOD 2020

  1. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    When unscrupulous salesperson Eleanor accidentally ends up in the Heaven-like Good Place in a case of mistaken identity, she must learn to pass as a good person if she is to avoid discovery and be cast into the Hellish torment of the Bad Place.

    OKBoomer Penpusher

    Nice. You've included a flaw for the MC and her predicament/story world in a way that shows how they will be in conflict. And even managed to squeeze in the stakes.

    Nice. You’ve included a flaw for the MC and her predicament/story world in a way that shows how they will be in conflict. And even managed to squeeze in the stakes.

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    Hapless new mother Audrey attempts to navigate the pressures and problems of motherhood. This is no easy task, especially with a selfish mother, a workaholic husband, and an oddball mothers group to contend with.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    An irk of mine in loglines - don't use characters' names. It's a waste of word count and tells us nothing about character. Instead, use flaw and function. (Unless you're pitching like, a Harry Potter sequel). What is the event that kicks off this story that upsets the status quo? Is it just that sheRead more

    An irk of mine in loglines – don’t use characters’ names. It’s a waste of word count and tells us nothing about character. Instead, use flaw and function. (Unless you’re pitching like, a Harry Potter sequel).

    What is the event that kicks off this story that upsets the status quo? Is it just that she gives birth?

    Is the series engine really just “a woman has a baby and life is difficult”?

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2020In:

    When a car accident sends him back to the 1970s a by-the-book, politically correct detective finds himself working in the “flying squad”, a special crimes unit infamous for using illeagal and brutal tactics.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    I think you've bullseyed the series engine. I'd just want to give it a polish on word choice, but all of that is up to personal preference anyway!

    I think you’ve bullseyed the series engine.

    I’d just want to give it a polish on word choice, but all of that is up to personal preference anyway!

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