(6th revision- w/o typo) After performing a flawed mummification, a child must atone for shirking human souls from the Earth Spirit; after much suffering, he rises as Anubis, the judge of the dead.

It is possible to just amend the previous post rather than adding an additional logline. It’s also really useful for both those commenting and those reading to see the evolution of the logline within one post rather than posting multiple versions of the same.