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Posted: 2019-10-09T06:29:22+10:00 In:

(6th revision) After performing a flowed mummification, a child must atone for shirking human souls from the Earth Spirit; after much suffering, he rises as Anubis, the judge of the dead.

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    1. Penpusher

      I think you mean ‘flawed’, but you can also say ‘botched’ or ‘bungled’ or even ‘unsuccessful’.

      Also consider making a new sentence for ‘After much suffering..’

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