Logliner
Posted: 2020-08-30T00:02:20+10:00 In:

A bored Barista becomes a teacher at a school in the town of Homewardsboundsville MO, where students with special abilities are being tested on. He not only has to navigate the strange characters and environment but figure out how to stop the downfall of this generation of mankind.

Comedy/Syfy – School for the Strange

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    1. Samurai

      Hi Christopherandre25,

      INTENTION: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind.
      OBSTACLE: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. (quite an obstacle ha.)

      First off – there’s a lot of ornamental for a logline. I’m not sure what him being a “bored barista” has to do with anything.

      Lets see…
      When he moves to a town filled with children with special abilities, a teacher must (stop the downfall of this generation of mankind?) *** you need to be very specific and clear how he’s going to do this.

      before/or else. What happens if he doesn’t?

      Hope this helps.

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    2. Singularity

      As thedarkhorse said.

      And what is so special about the “special abilities” that all of them are in danger of some kind of “downfall”. It’s not clear what the problem is nor what, specifically, he must do about .

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