Posted: 2013-09-20T04:38:32+10:00 In:

A brother and a sister takes care of each other in an abusive home an because of this a special bond is created between them, like symbiosis, one thing that can not live without another

Symbiosis

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    1. What makes this an interesting, unique relationship? Many siblings have a special bond. In fact, the description seems to be of the type one often finds between twins.

      “Take care of each other” is not something people would go to the movies to see, either. It is also an open goal, which rarely works for the screen.

      The logline describes a fairly static situation, that changes only very slowly. In order to have a movie story, we need to anticipate big moments that are full of tension – and interesting to bring to the screen in a visual way.

      Finally, the point of view must be clear. Is it his story or hers?

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      Who is the main character?

      “Takes care of each other” is not interesting enough to expect people buy a ticket to see it. The abuse won’t help either, it will rather turn more people away.

      “a special bond” sounds like the relationship twins often have, so it is not unique. How can you make it unique and interesting for a film?

      The concept needs some work, or else we need more detail…

      Good luck!

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