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A career tramp turned conman has to save his loot and prison-time when his ex-wife comes undercover to help IRS nab him

A career tramp turned conman has to save his loot and prison-time when his ex-wife comes undercover to help IRS nab him
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    1. Singularity

      I think Foxtrot25 is on to something. ?It might make for a more interesting story if the ex-wife were the protagonist when the IRS asks her to be the bait to catch her con artist husband.

      Recluse: Given the number of times you’ve posted on this premise, it seems that you’re much attracted to the “career tramp”, ex-con. Okay, but the problem is, none of the versions give us a reason to be attracted to him as the protagonist. ?Why should we not want him ?to be brought to justice, serve hard time for his crimes?

      Just saying.

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    2. Singularity

      The career tramp description can be cut – it’s no longer relevant seeing as he’s a conman.

      What is the one event that makes him realize the ex is under cover?? This would be the inciting incident and needs to be specified in the logline, then the goal he pursues as a result of this event needs to be described. What he chooses to do as a result of having the IRS on him is his goal, and is currently missing.

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    3. Uberwriter

      How does one save his “prison-time”

      You can avoid prison time or serve it.

      A better angle may be to focus on the ex-wife having to catch and expose the ex-husband.

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