A cloned Marine persuades his superiors to send him and two others on a covert mission to an enemy planet, to prevent a rogue officer from starting an interstellar war.
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A cloned Marine persuades his superiors to send him and two others on a covert mission to an enemy planet, to prevent a rogue officer from starting an interstellar war.
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Why does he volunteer? ?IOW: ?what’s the inciting incident that motivates him?
And ?what is the dramatic purpose of having a cloned character for a protagonist? ?Why does the story require sending a cloned Marine to do a Marine’s job instead of a real Marine?
>>>starting an interstellar war
Between whom? ?Different colonies of humans? Between homo sapiens and another species? ?Do earthlings have a dog ?in this interstellar war? ??
What is the personal story hook for you? ?What intrigues you about this story that you must write it? ?The notion of cloned humans fighting as proxy Marines, doing humans’ dirty work? ?Or is it the personal hook the threat of an interstellar war? ?And if that latter, what makes the interstellar war you have in mind, unique, different from all the other interstellar wars in all the other scifi movies?