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Posted: March 20, 20202020-03-20T13:18:49+10:00 2020-03-20T13:18:49+10:00In: Drama

A college basketball star, abducted and raised under an alias by his addicted mother must jeopardize his shot at the championship when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.

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    1. yqwertz Mentor
      2020-03-20T20:13:04+10:00Added an answer on March 20, 2020 at 8:13 pm

      In your previous logline I commented that the main characters were not driving the story. This logline proves my point as you have the same story but different characters.

      Again, how does he know he was abducted? If his mother has been arrested, the police know who the father is. If his mother simply told him that without proof, then how does he know her confession was not a drug induced hallucination? Either way, the basketball game seems to be a subplot that may not merit mention in the logline.

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