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Keith
Posted: July 5, 20142014-07-05T00:58:24+10:00 2014-07-05T00:58:24+10:00In: Public

A corrupt, rural sheriff is pressured by his drug-lord bosses to protect their enterprise from the FBI while helping the feds search for an abducted girl.

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    1. Jaffer Penpusher
      2021-05-12T09:08:24+10:00Added an answer on May 12, 2021 at 9:08 am

      I can sense an interesting story and tension hidden in this logline. You need to reshuffle and restructure this logline at least 10 times and believe me it will be quite fun to the possibilities.
      My suggestion would be to put your protagonist in a position where he has to choose between his duty/ values and the dirty business he is in.

      Example: A corrupt rural sheriff’s life comes under jeopardy when he has to decide between his duty and the dirty business of protecting his drug lord.

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