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Posted: 2019-11-25T06:25:28+10:00 In:

A crush kindled comedienne and?a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen

A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen?

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    1. Best Answer
      Singularity

      You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one.

      1: Not sure what is a “crush kindled comedienne”

      2: connection delusional fan… do you mean a stalker?

      3: “a viral coma recovery,” again I don’t know what this means

      In other words, after reading this logline, I still don’t know what the story is about

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      I’m with Richiev.

      I’m not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who’s come out of a coma and they’re searching for a teenager – and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker….

      Check out the formula to help with formatting and to understand what a logline is and how it works.

      Simple is better in a logline. We don’t need fancy descriptions… we just need something that tells us the story.

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      Penpusher

      Following the cessation of long-term life support,??the creative mind of an abused teen terrorized into a coma, anomalously wakes into viral internet stardom where he relies on a childhood girlfriend, a boyfriend delusional meth addict and pain escallating hallucination for rediscovery
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