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Posted: 2019-06-16T22:16:19+10:00 In:

A desperate father decides not to rob a bank after receiving a loving call from his wife, but a corrupt cop blackmails him to proceed or face arrest for the stolen car and intent to commit a felony. (36) – For a short 6 minute screenplay

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    1. Singularity

      Seems like a rather convoluted plot to set up, build to a climax and resolve in only 6 minutes.

      fwiw

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    2. Penpusher

      Does it have to be this short for a competition or entry to a festival? Consider making this longer.

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