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Posted: July 25, 20132013-07-25T16:14:21+10:00 2013-07-25T16:14:21+10:00In: Public

A disgraced athletics coach comes to the aid of a homeless rebellious teenager and discovers she has outstanding athletics ability.

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-07-25T16:59:11+10:00Added an answer on July 25, 2013 at 4:59 pm

      With the exception of the kid being homeless, what makes this different from Hard Ball, or Champions, or a dozen other similar sounding sports movies? What’s the hook?

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    2. 2013-07-26T14:01:49+10:00Added an answer on July 26, 2013 at 2:01 pm

      Thats a good start. But it only tells the first act of the film. What happens next? Who’s the bad guy in this film? Where is the conflict?

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    3. Olhiveeran
      2013-07-26T19:15:47+10:00Added an answer on July 26, 2013 at 7:15 pm

      reminds me of Vince Lambordi’s

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    4. Karel Segers Logliner
      2015-09-24T22:57:05+10:00Added an answer on September 24, 2015 at 10:57 pm

      Thanks for the comments guys Paul

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