A doll maker that got blessed because he can reunites with his kid..
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By reunites i mean the doll that he make is magically transform to become his kid
What you’ve specified is an event (not a logline)
Protagonist: The doll maker
Event: His latest creation becomes alive (as his kid)
Logline becomes…
“When a doll maker’s latest creation becomes alive to be his kid, he must [do this action to] [&/or] [reach this goal]”
>>>As a result of this Inciting Event, what becomes his objective GOAL??
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The MANDATORY in a logline —
? story?s first major event or ?Inciting Incident?
? hero?s function or role in the story (e.g. a mother, a cop, a scientist)
? the hero?s goal or main action in the story
OPTIONAL (unnecessary if implied in the Inciting Incident)
? hero?s weakness/flaw (e.g. headstrong, timid, solitary, cocky, depressed)
? the obstacle(s) and/or the Antagonist
? the stakes
Formula: “When [a major event happens], [the hero], must [do the main action]”
Logline for JAWS becomes —
When [a swimmer is brutally killed by a shark], [a small-town sheriff] must [stop the killing monster]
Good Luck Pratama Putra Wijaya!!
Goal/obstacle demonstrated as an event or action to demonstrate emotion.
A doll maker?s dolls come to life and uses this to bring his children back to life but …. (obstacle)
You stated a character here. Have you seen Dead Silence (horror movie). Thats a movie with the same chracter (devil one).
You need to put a logline where a reader can feel your whole concept and the movie.
Again you put this in drama. It can be a fantasy or horror. And your name, I think it is spelled as ‘Prathama’????????