A drunk, homeless, hopeless man wanders around the streets of Los Angeles, California. One day, he catches a beautiful homeless woman buying food for her son with the only $5 she receives from a little boy. The homeless man is inspired by this act and starts building a hot chocolate station with the few dollars he obtains in one day to people in the cold. He sells hundreds of hot chocolates until Summer comes. The man must make lemonade but there are no lemons in Los Angeles. He can’t afford a plane and doesn’t have a car.
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A drunk, homeless, hopeless man wanders around the streets of Los Angeles, California. One day, he catches a beautiful homeless woman buying food for her son with the only $5 she receives from a little boy. The homeless man is inspired by this act and starts building a hot chocolate station with the few dollars he obtains in one day to people in the cold. He sells hundreds of hot chocolates until Summer comes. The man must make lemonade but there are no lemons in Los Angeles. He can’t afford a plane and doesn’t have a car.
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Interesting concept, but as a logline, I found this way too long and hard to follow.
How is it possible that there?can be?plenty of chocolate in L.A. for the man to use? when cocoa is not grown in L.A. or the USA?– but there are?no lemons which used to be grown in abundance in the area and? can still?be found in many residential backyards (like the one where I used to live)?? The premise just?doesn’t seem believable.? Or am I missing something?