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Posted: 2017-02-22T08:09:00+10:00 In:

A fatherless stoner on a fast-track to nowhere discovers the family he never knew is closer than he thinks after he takes a job in a mafia-backed 80s nightclub.

A fatherless stoner on a fast-track to nowhere discovers the family he never knew is closer than he thinks after he takes a job in a mafia-backed 80s nightclub.
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    1. Penpusher

      …as above. Intrigued by main action in ?80?s themed mafia backed nightclub?.

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    2. Singularity

      Agreed with DPG.

      I suggest you read the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar. There are several key components a logline needs which are missing in this post.

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    3. Singularity

      Okay. ?That’s a setup for a plot. But what is the plot that results? ?What becomes his objective goal as a result of the discovery?
      Who or what opposes him?
      What’s at stake? ?(What does he gain by succeeding, lose by failing?)

      And: what do you conceive to be the story hook?

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