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thedarkhorseSamurai
A financially stricken screenwriter works through his crippling writer’s block with the help of a misanthropic author, to write the great American novel.
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Second one: Despite being in huge debt, a Hollywood hack screenwriter struggles to defeat his crippling writer’s block to write the great American novel.
First off, why is a screenwriter writing a novel?? He gave up on film?
Secondly, okay, I get that this is a writer that’s run out of money and really needs to pay the bills.? However, the obstacle is… writer’s block?? That’s not very exciting.
The misanthropic author seems like… okay, the screenwriter has some help, but not a lot, so writer’s block is still something to worry about.? All that does is reduce the challenge, which wasn’t so ominous to begin with.? I see you got rid of that guy in your rewrite though.? ?Probably a good move.
The fact that this is “the great American novel” could be intriguing, but there’s nothing else in the logline to support that.? It makes me think maybe this is meant to be historical fiction?? I’d use the actual name of the writer then, if we’re actually watching a movie about how The Great Gatsby or something came to be.
Hi Scott.
Yeah I honestly thought there’s not much conflict here.
I kept thinking it’s less about writer’s block and more about the issues causing it. (Of which I’m not sure about – whether it’s this cocky Hollywood hack having to humble himself and ask for help, or perhaps he has commitment issues, or perhaps he’s self-sabotaging himself, etc. Perhaps all of them. I dunno.)
So yeah – this one’s still quite foggy to me.
The misanthropic author was going to be this workaholic children’s author writing a screenplay. Meanwhile, he’s this Hollywood hack, no longer passionate about writing scripts who is taking this chance by writing a book (and thus perhaps rediscovering his love for writing and why he did it in the first place.)
So yeah – a film for writers but it’s incredibly foggy.
Also: this logline is part of a “Magnolia” film of sorts – I put up three other loglines/stories (the ones with the retired novelist, playwright, journalist) and they should all intertwine. It should be a love letter to writers 🙂
(Think “Wonder Boys” meets “Magnolia”.)
But again – it’s all very foggy and half-baked still.