The merrier – Comedy
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I’m a bit confused. The logline says everything and nothing. I think it’s a bit too generic to attract attention.
If there’s any specific situation that makes the striving either difficult or hilarious or just somewhat special, it would be a good idea to include it somehow, just to give the idea some recognition value.
Rest assured at PP1 they lose their minds, I would be interested to know character(s) in log line. Their motivation for that silver lining, set up (college/picnic/asylum) the obstacle (peers, a person who is the villian) and what they eventually learn
Yes, and you will need one main character, and an inciting incident – what happens to him/her that sets this journey in motion. What is the ‘silver lining’? Why will they lose their minds if they don’t find it?