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zelozelosPenpusher
Posted: June 26, 20142014-06-26T07:17:59+10:00 2014-06-26T07:17:59+10:00In: Public

A group of musicians in Portland make their first nation-wide hit, but when faced with the uncertainty of continuing their careers, fake their own deaths for wealth and celebrity.

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    1. beezeebee Penpusher
      2021-09-03T18:17:29+10:00Added an answer on September 3, 2021 at 6:17 pm

      Hi zelozelos. I LOVE this idea! So many movies out there about the hero/es getting their first big break and struggling with the usual issues: creative differences, insecurity, what have you, but can’t remember a story where they go to such lengths to make it happen for them. The thing I’m not clear on is whether their fake death is the inciting incident for the story, or the climax already? In other words, what is the middle of your story about? Their struggle to find a solution or their fake deaths not being a solution to their issue, and if so, where will their main opposition come from? Cheers!

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