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Posted: 2017-08-24T22:51:37+10:00 In:

A high school basketball phenom drops out of school and drifts for thirteen years, but his luck is about to change as the road to redemption, love, and a second chance runs right through McCallister Park.

A high school basketball phenom drops out of school and drifts for thirteen years, but his luck is about to change as the road to redemption, love, and a second chance runs right through McCallister Park.
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    1. Singularity

      This bears a resemblance to “The Natural”. ?Other than the sport, what distinguishes this from that film which was also about redemption, love and a 2nd chance?

      And what is the inciting incident? ?Why did he drop out and drift for 13 years?

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    2. Is he playing basketball at all in those thirteen years — like grifting and conning Ala?White Men Can’t Jump?or playing amateur leagues?

      Why does he drop out of high school — what is the inciting incident that causes this?

      What changes his luck and offers him a chance at redemption (and this should really be the inciting incident, e.g.?When a once-prodigious basketball player gets a chance at redemption as…?

      We would need more information to do a detailed logline. So far, this is far too vague and ambiguous. Hope this helps.

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