Prince of Darkness
A hopelessly bad-tempered aspiring cop in a crime-filled city is bitten by a vampire, giving him the supernatural powers necessary to defeat the criminals overpowering the local police force.
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You could probably get away with removing “hopelessly bad-tempered,” since it’s not necessary to know for the basic plot. I like it otherwise and tells me exactly what it is. I think removing that one chunk will make it shorter and more concise.
I like the idea of the cop getting a “super power” by becoming a Vampire. Your logline is succinct and clever, leaving me wanting to know more. Very good!