A hot- tempered uncle accidentally slaps a nagging woman over an ownership of a compound wall, issue soon spirals into a building-wide sensationalised political circus of gossip, mockery, legalities, and indifference.
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A hot- tempered uncle accidentally slaps a nagging woman over an ownership of a compound wall, issue soon spirals into a building-wide sensationalised political circus of gossip, mockery, legalities, and indifference.
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I think you get across the feeling of chaos and the anticipation of a company wide meltdown. But for the logline, I think you can improve it by getting a bit more specific. ‘Issue soon spirals’, feels a tad ambiguous, it doesn’t really tell us anything. I would recommend trying a version that strips it down to two-three lines. Otherwise, cool!
what do you think?