Logliner
Posted: 2017-02-22T00:55:37+10:00 In:

A human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.

A human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.
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    1. Logliner

      Hi solidjim,
      i like the concept of an Elvis/time machines sci-fi ?but have a few questions on the logline that ight hopefully tease this out a bit more

      1. what do abandonment issues have to do with saving the galaxy? why are abandonment issues relevant?
      2. why is a human orphan raised in outer space the best protagonist here?
      3. or is elvis the protagonist?
      4. what’s the call to action?

      good luck!

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    2. I’ve left a response on your newest revision of this.

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