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Posted: July 22, 20122012-07-22T13:51:57+10:00 2012-07-22T13:51:57+10:00In: Public

A Jewish Irish female, influenced by Irish and Jewish mythology and mysticism as practiced in the bigoted ideological, religious and social structure of the early twentieth century, helps others with their lives as she herself struggles with prejudice, near death and perpetual displacement in her journey from wealth to poverty to the stability of marriage and escape to Australia.

A TV series, based on a collection of letters written by a Jewish Irish girl to her non Jewish friend from the late 1890?s until mid World War 1 when the letters suddenly stopped.

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    1. hospas Logliner
      2012-07-22T14:18:12+10:00Added an answer on July 22, 2012 at 2:18 pm

      This is too long so I tried to shorten it but it is probably still too long-

      The life story of an early twentieth century Jewish Irish female, her struggle with Irish and Jewish mythology, mysticism and religious bigotry as she helps others by her ability to sense the impending death of people and animals, while her inability to see her own future causes her perpetual displacement from home and friends as she journeys from wealth to poverty to the stability of marriage and escape to Australia.

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    2. 2012-07-22T17:33:51+10:00Added an answer on July 22, 2012 at 5:33 pm

      You need to pull what’s really important from the story and focus on those elements.

      “An early twentieth century Jewish Irish female struggles with mythological, mystical and religious bigotry as she helps others using her ability to sense the impending death of people and animals, all the while unable to see her own future.”

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    3. damien
      2012-07-24T00:21:08+10:00Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 12:21 am

      It needs to indicate the genre. Is she psychic, as in a supernatural thriller? There is the riches to rags to riches story line there which gives a producer an idea of how to market the film so start from there. Who is the main antagonist, general bigotry is not enough for the protagonist to go up against because it is an ideology of the masses, the protagonist needs to go up against someone who represents the bigotry, someone whose bigotry stops the main character from achieving what they set out to achieve,

      Try to sum up the story in as few words as possible, too much information and eyes glaze over.

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