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Posted: August 30, 20172017-08-30T04:42:08+10:00 2017-08-30T04:42:08+10:00In: Drama

A lonely computer programmer?s unorthodox online search for ?Mr. Right? is terminated by the government, so she tries something radical?interfacing with a human.

A lonely computer programmer?s unorthodox online search for ?Mr. Right? is terminated by the government, so she tries something radical?interfacing with a human.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-08-30T19:09:42+10:00Added an answer on August 30, 2017 at 7:09 pm

      What are the stakes? It seems like a rather tame affair. Finding MR. Right, not finding him, has been done before, and oh so many times.? Is there anything else about her story that will make her finding a BF stand out?

      Also, is the government involved for a reason or is it just filling the need for a powerful force standing in her way?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-08-30T05:36:46+10:00Added an answer on August 30, 2017 at 5:36 am

      I think there is a kernel for an interesting story, but I don’t understand why the Big Bad Government (BBG) has to get involved in her love life. ?What are the stakes for the BBG that it has to shut her down?

      Why not just have her go retro, fall back on old-fashioned face time with real guys, because on line match making hasn’t worked; it always matches her up with “Mr. Wrong”.

      I just don’t get the BBG conspiracy angle.?

      fwiw

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