A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP’s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.
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A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP’s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.
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You might want to re-word this one: very confusing.
“When his Vice President is murdered by those out to stop his plan to rebuild America, The president fakes his death in to secretly investigate who is behind the conspiracy.”
A man, noted as the young president of America, kills himself off to go undercover to stop who is trying to ruin his plans for rebuilding America when he finds the death of his VP?s death a hard one to execute and even harder to explain.
1: Is he the president or is he just noted as the president.
2: Does he kill himself? (As your logline says) Or does he fake his death? (And if he does kill himself, how does he go undercover if he is dead?)
3: You talk about the death of the VP but now say the VP is alive. This is confusing.
4: If the death of the VP is not the inciting incident, then what is?