Love on the 74th floor
SaintPeterPenpusher
A man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.
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You made it AND you got it!! And I personally can feel your story although I?m glad not to have experienced it.. Don’t know if this is only describing a situation – but I leave that to others on this site Now it’s time for me ? Tarantino and Spielberg – to do the same. Maybe it?s time to raise the stakes; make it 19 words?! Let all loglines be a learning experience. Amen?
I quite like this, we’ve got most ingredients needed, but can you expand on “man”. Give him a flaw which makes it even more incrediable. A man suffering from vertigo must… A hopeless romantic… A man scared of commitment…
Give him a voice. Make the task even more unatainiable. We know the towers will fall, but what is his internal battle? What does he need to overcome to save his love? Is 74 floors all there is? Or is it 74 floors of doubt?
My ‘vijf cent’
You can change “man” for an other more powerful word that describes the man, if that’s even possible. For so far:
A adulteress man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.
Get back later…
These Irwin Allen type stories need little else unless you have something special.