Samurai
Posted: 2018-06-01T12:19:28+10:00 In:

A mild-mannered but disgruntled teller leads a hostage revolt against his captors during a bank siege in order to get away with the stolen loot for himself.

A mild-mannered but disgruntled teller leads a hostage revolt against his captors during a bank siege in order to get away with the stolen loot for himself.
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    1. Best Answer
      Samurai

      A re-working of an old idea.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      I like the premise.

      How about:
      A mild-mannered, disgruntled teller uses a hostage situation during a bank robbery to steal the loot for himself.
      (18 words instead of 27)

      Is the protagonist male or female?

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    3. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Tony Edward:

      I am attracted to the? story because:

      1]I want to see how he pulls it off without getting caught.? It essentially becomes a heist flick, does it not?
      2] I want to see the character arc, how circumstances provide an opportunity for a nice guy, a heretofore compliant, law-abiding milquetoast, to unleash his repressed shadow .

      As for moral justification, what’s the moral justification for Danny Ocean ripping off the treasure vault of 3 Las Vegas casinos?? ?There really isn’t.? The? audience buys into the character and the heist on the basis of emotional factors.? So sell the emotional justification, not the moral.

      Regards and best wishes with this story.

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