A new actress in a year-round haunted house attraction falls for the resident ladykiller

And then what happens? ?The logline sets up a 1st Act situation but has no 2nd Act ?plot.

As a result of falling in love for the “ladykiller”, ?what becomes the woman’s objective goal? ?What becomes the dramatic problem? ? What difference does it make to the actress as to how the relationship works out? ?Or to the audience — why should they care or be interested in what happens? ?What’s at stake?

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