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Posted: August 25, 20212021-08-25T12:40:42+10:00 2021-08-25T12:40:42+10:00In: Adventure

A NewEngland nurse finds herself in the center of a medical genetic ethics clash while caring for her patients – a story of modern medicine and another of ancient Mayan healing, unfold side by side, weaving togehter in this medical science fiction thriller.

From the novel XENO TRANSPLANT – The Throne of the Red Jaguar.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-08-25T21:40:33+10:00Added an answer on August 25, 2021 at 9:40 pm

      I think two things would help improve this logline

      First: Adding a goal for the lead character into the logline; what does the lead character want to accomplish?

      Second: You should add stakes to the logline. You describe this as an adventure thriller, which implies there are steaks, but a ‘debate’ doesn’t imply stakes. What happens if the lead character loses the debate? (Whether an actual debate or metaphorical debate)

      Anyway, when the lead character ‘finds’ herself in the debate, this should cause her to have a goal, and there should be consequences if she fails to accomplish her goal.

      Hope that helps

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    2. NisVinten Logliner
      2021-08-27T01:32:32+10:00Added an answer on August 27, 2021 at 1:32 am

      I agree! 🙂

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