Samurai
Posted: 2019-04-28T23:17:15+10:00 In:

A paranoid, schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please a dozen quirky and unique females, who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.

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    3 Reviews

    1. Mentor

      Maybe I misinterpret, but it sounds more like comedy than drama. Either way, I have a few questions:

      If the man loves all women, why does he want to please only 12? Why not please all women he meets?

      What is at stake? What happens if he fails to please any or all of the 12 woman?

      When you say “…who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective…” are you implying that the schizophrenic man thinks the woman are in love with him, but they aren’t? Or that the woman are attracted to him because they find his schizophrenia adorable?

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    2. Samurai

      LOGLINE UPDATE #1:

      A schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please them, especially a dozen quirky females who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.

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    3. Singularity

      I’m not sure what the story is, as the plot is unclear.

      What is the inciting event? What is his primary action? And most importantly, what is his specific goal?

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