World Cop
Alan SmitheePenpusher
A paraplegic marine accepts robotic limbs in order to take down the Artificial Intelligence company responsible for murdering his family.
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The only thing I think you need is what does he do to take them down? ?Just a few words. Or give us a paragraph and we’ll see what we can hammer out.
In drama, Big Bad Corporations are the long (Jungian) shadow of particular people. So who is the particular Big Bad Person in the Big Bad Corporation responsible for the murder of his family?
I suggest the logline? would be stronger if it tagged a specific person as the antagonist/nemesis,? not an impersonal corporation.? The antagonist/nemesis needs a face.
I would try to connect the handicap with the antagonist as well. This, plus the family murders will make things real personal.