A police detective is turned into a vampire by the brood of the serial killer he is tracking, forcing the cop to decide whether to fight for his humanity and hunt the pack down, or succumb to becoming a predator and hunt humans for food.

Hey Richard – I’m always wary of loglines where the main action being described in the film is the character making a decision. Characters make thousands of decisions throughout the course of a movie. I couldn’t bare to watch a character take 90 mins to make one single decision. What is his actual goal, not just the dilemma. To catch the killer?

The “thirst” growing in him feels like it becomes a source of antagonism for the character as he pursues the killer, but it doesn’t feel like the whole movie is going to be him pacing in his apartment, going “should I hunt this guy? Or should I go out and kill? Can’t decide.”

For my money, I think I’d be more interested in watching a movie about a cop hunting a serial killer, who is then turned into a vampire, and can’t overcome his killer instinct, becoming everything that he was fighting against. He gains perspective on the serial killer’s affliction. I wouldn’t know where to take the setup from there though.