A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.
Alan SmitheePenpusher
A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.
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who are “they”?
My question; is the story about the private investigator protecting the ‘man’ or is it about him finding the ‘man’?
One of those two elements should be dropped from the logline because it is adding to the confusion.
Also, who is does the ‘man’ need protecting from?
When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.