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Posted: 2015-10-26T03:43:08+10:00 In:

A professor goes antiquing and finds a golden credenza that melts Nazis so the USA keeps it forever.

Raiders of the Lost Ark

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    1. Singularity

      This logline doesn’t have an inciting incident or goal and therefore fails to describe a plot. Further more the MC lacks a character flaw description and as a result there is no implication of an inner journey.

      I think best to re draft this logline with the above information included.

      Hope this helps.

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    2. Singularity

      A swashbuckling American archaeologist must find the Ark of the Covenant before the Nazis do and harness its legendary power.
      (20 words)
      RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK

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