A reaper is going to take an old man life,but the old man want to finish his life checklist before the reaper get him.
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A reaper is going to take an old man life,but the old man want to finish his life checklist before the reaper get him.
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This logline falls in line with your others, therefore, I suggest you read the comments made on your other posts and apply them to this one.
One point to consider here is the lack of clarity about the protagonist – the Grim Reaper or the old man? Once you decide who the main character is, like with the other loglines, give him a reason to need to achieve a specific goal.