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Posted: 2016-09-03T20:41:31+10:00 In:

A retired couple’s tranquil life is shaken by the sudden death of their best friend. Now they must go on a road trip across Europe to scatter his ashes before the imminent birth of their first grandchild. A series of misadventures and encounters challenge their marriage and identities.

A retired couple’s tranquil life is shaken by the sudden death of their best friend. Now they must go on a road trip across Europe to scatter his ashes before the imminent birth of their first grandchild. A series of misadventures and encounters challenge their marriage and identities.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      THank you for your feedback! Will work on it more.

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    2. Singularity

      There is no clear single goal described in the logline.

      Either they want to save their marriage or their identities – only which ever one of these is the primary goal needs to be described in the logline. The events that precede this goal, according to the logline, don’t logically necessitate this as a goal. What specific event makes them need to save their marriage? Or what specific event makes them need to retain their identities?

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    3. You hold try and keep your logline as clear and concise as possible, usually merged into one sentence and about 20-30 words long. Look at the training tab at the top of the page to learn how to properly structure it and try to rewrite it. Hope this helps.

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